Incipient Oof Dah

April 03, 2004

Chapter three looks pretty good. I rewrote the introduction, tacked several pages of tables and commentary onto the conclusion, revised my transitions, played up a sub theme, and more carefully defined civil religion.

I will give it a once-more-over tomorrow then send it out.

Chapter two is next, and it is a bit of a mess. It is also badly written and structured as a story and a caboose. I might take the caboose and combine it with other material on civil religion to make a short stand-alone chapter. In fact, that is a very good idea.

I hate good ideas, they always mean more work.

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