Not So Bad

November 10, 2003

After another email exchange with my advisor I do not feel so bad. I can keep the structure, I just need to work on introductions and conclusions, making my points at the top of the paragraph or sub-heading rather than in the middle. I can do that.

I still will cut down on John Henry Hobart of New York City, which is a shame because he is a fun guy. Well, fun in a very smart-very busy-very argumentative-very high church kind of a way.

I might paste some of the deleted paragraphs here. My academic voice is verysomewhat unlike either of my blogging voices.

And back to work.

Posted by Red Ted at November 10, 2003 01:07 AM | TrackBack