Got the first comments

June 17, 2003


Got the first comments on chapter 4. This just in, I am better at spotting a change than I am at describing what has changed. My players and concepts are muddy and confusing. I need to get better at specifying the problem and then explaining why it mattered to people at the time.

I can not find my notes on chapter 2 and what changes that will require. It looks like I get to mess with the beginning of 4 for a little while until I can find my advisor's comments on 2. It was only a year ago, I SHOULD not have lost anything.

And so to second lunch and thence to teach.

Posted by Red Ted at June 17, 2003 02:13 AM | TrackBack